Saturday, August 20, 2005

What is wrong with this sentence?

d-ALPHA GEMS are small, soft gelatin capsules containing vitamin E derived from soybean oil in the highest concentration possible, making it naturally soy-free.

My husband said that the subject and the final pronoun do not agree. I say that "derived from soybean oil" and "naturally soy-free" do not agree.

1 comment:

weblogbob83 said...

I thought it was that the first letter wasn't capitalized.